Thursday, October 14, 2010

Freestyle Writing
Based on the movie Faith like Potatoes with a twist!

            Dancing with the Stars is on! Oh yes, finally. "The next person kicked off is................We will find out when we come back!" I am going to kill the T.V! I can't stand to watch another Hillshire Farms commercial, I keep watching though. It shows a big tractor trailer. I see my poor niece laying on the old dirt road, covered in blood. I see a doctor telling me,"Its too late."Its my fault she isn't alive today! I should have watched the road, I should of told her to buckle up. She was only 8! I loved that girl. I slowly walk up to the T.V, press the off button, and leave without a word.

1 comment:

  1. OMG Cassie! Lot of good describing words and very sad but...! I think that it is a little heavy...and it kind of gave me whiplash. I like it though, although I think it's a very disturbing story.

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