Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Outline Essay 11

TS: There are many different problems that teenagers face
Bell: problem
Echos: situation, issue

           
SD: In Japan, teenagers are going through harsh times
            CM: The tsunami was extremely devastating, and they don’t have food or water that isn’t radiated
            CM: I don’t know what to do

SD: People have drug problems
            CM: There are kids our age in public schools who do drugs
            CM: I feel bad for these people cause something must be really messed up in their lives in order for them turn to drugs.
           

SD: People at Pine Point need help
                        CM: A lot of kids are made fun of for no reason
                        CM: If you say one wrong word, the laughing and questions start

CS: All teenagers have problems, and we need to help them

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